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How genes can change your life?
It needs a long, long time to come to this knowledge about genes, but nowadays everyone knows what genes are and for what they are so important.
Scientist don’t know anything about them, that’s why genes and genetic engineering is a actual topic and still be one in the next time, and so it’s important that scientist research.
Today there are many positive and negative things we can do with genetic engineering.
In the following paragraphs I give some examples for negative and positive things.
First I want to explain some positive things. Since we can use the DNA (our own code) to find persons, it helps the police to solve crimes and found criminals.
The next positive point is a controversial point, because there are groups, who don’t think it’s positive. I talk of the using genetic engineering for food. By genetic engineering we can preserve something or we can make bigger and red tomatoes or corn. Another useful thing is that it’s possible to make fruits or vegetables resistible to lower temperatures.
But now my favourite negative using, it’s cloning. If you cloning you copy your DNA and then you have the same person a second time, for outsiders it’s impossible to identify the real person and the clone and I think that have a bad solution for the human being.
Another problem is that one fingerprint is enough to identify us, or new cameras which recognise faces with a database, I think that lead to a real control state and then I think we have a too small privacy.
In my opinion genetic engineering is a positive thing but we should not pass the limits.
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str: How can genes change ...?
exp: it takes a long time
exp: to get / gain knowledge
exp: ... and what they're useful for / why they're important
exp: 'aktuell' = topical/ current
C? "Scientist don’t know anything about them" ??? (really?)
congruence: genes and genetic engineering are ....
exp: will remain important for quite some time to come
exp: it's important that scientists go on researching
In this paragraph you say VERY LITTLE in many words. The paragraph is also quite incoherent. It's just a collection of single sentences.
Be careful: you're supposed to write an article - not a kind of essay.
Leute = people
to found = gründen / to find (found) = finden
exp: I'm talking of the use of genetic engineering for the production of genetically modified food.
exp: with the help of ... (mit Hilfe)
exp: to make something resistant to something
exp: my favourite negative use ('abuse')
g: if you clone a living thing, then you create a copy of ...
tense, expresson: ... it will have bad consequences for the human race
(Of course, you could distinguish between clone and real person because the clone would be younger normally. If I got cloned for example, then my clone would start as a foetus and embryo and it would have to grow up just like any human being.
You suddenly include information about biometrics but that's a different topic really.
Quite a few vocabulary mistakes.
Have a look at how to write an article again!
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